classifiedscript Chapter 159: The complete body of the original and the animation
Chapter 159: The complete body of the original and the animation
lie in front of the computer.
After and Xinlan finished talking about the "Death Note" manuscript, as a diligent author, Su Chen immediately began to explode the follow-up chapters of "Violet Evergarden".
According to this sales momentum, as long as you work harder and control the plot, it is really not far from the day the physical book is released.
In order to achieve the goal of astonishing readers at the beginning, Su Chen made some magical changes in his previous works, adjusted the order of chapters, and arranged the story of An, which should have appeared in Chapter 2, to Chapter 1.
So now he needs to write the first chapter of the original work.
is the content of the seventh chapter in the anime, the only blank title.
is the title of "The Novelist and the Autograph Doll" in the novel.
This chapter tells the story of a script novelist whose wife died of illness and her daughter was prematurely aging. Violet, who came to write a ghostwriter, fulfilled the agreement between him and his daughter, so she finally realized the importance of the agreement to people, and the loneliness that important people leave and cannot be with her.
Although not as stunning as the episode of Ann and his mother, the level of tearing is no less than a tear gas canister.
Especially in the anime of the previous life, there are also famous scenes of walking on the lake of Violet. The seventh episode is 16 minutes and 15 seconds, and the whole process is high-energy and beautiful. Almost every frame can be taken as a wallpaper.
But now Su Chen can't restore those details.
He is just a novelist, not an animator.
What he can do at present is to put more effort into the illustrations, so that readers can feel as much as possible the shock of Violet walking on the lake in the original work.
As for the plot arrangement of the novel, how should I put it, Su Chen still intends to make a magical change, rubbing the animation and the original novel into a ball.
After all, the original has many flaws, and the animation has been modified too seriously, so Su Chen plans to compromise and advance with the plot of the original, but the details are still based on animation.
In short, it not only has the soul of the original, but also absorbs the details of the animation. The entire enhanced version of "Violet Eternal Garden" has no flaws.
As for the follow-up, how should Violet’s young master write...
Emmm.
This is also a problem.
First of all, in the original work, the first scroll is almost always a guessing game with readers, letting the readers just know that there is such an important role, but in the book, life and death are uncertain. It is not until the second scroll that Shao Zuo is not dead.
But in the animation of the original Shredder Jingani, Shao Zuo was cold at the beginning, sacrificed in the war, and after the entire episode, it has always only existed in Violet's memory killing.
So the problem came.
For the first porter of Su Chen, should Shao Zuo get the box lunch?
The answer is of course!
Writing like this is a blade...Ah yeah, writing like this is a work of God!
The first volume is the same as the original, and he is an old riddler until the end without mentioning Shao Zuo’s life and death. Then the content at the beginning of the second volume will give the reader a fatal blow. The information on Shao Zuo’s death will be disclosed at the beginning, and then he will enter in one breath The main thread of the late animation, the speed of light ends.
This is what Su Chen planned.
Two volumes, more than a dozen chapters directly complete the "Violet Evergarden".
Because of the peak of this work, there are only two volumes up and down. As for other extravaganzas, love stories, and so on, in Su Chen's view, there is no high level at the beginning (of course, it may also be a problem with domestic translation. Except for the scroll, the rest feel like a soulless machine turn).
The most ideal Violet in his heart is to walk through the original work in the first half, and the main line of the animation in the second half, and finally an open ending, leaving readers with unlimited imagination and a perfect curtain call.
After making a decision, Su Chen brushed his head and produced the manuscript of Chapter 2, and then compared the content of the animation and began to revise it.
When the finished product was finished, he yawned, threw the manuscript on the QQ of grapefruit, then picked up the drawing board and started designing the illustrations for Chapter 2.
Classic dual thread.
You will never guess, what your favorite light novel writer is still working part-time secretly.
On the other side, the grapefruit at work quickly noticed the manuscript sent by Su Chen.
"The novelist and the automatic memoir..."
staring at the title of the chapter, nodding his head with satisfaction, thinking "Little Ghost teacher really didn't let me down" in his heart, Yuzi began to review the manuscript.
As imagined, it is still like a tear gas, a unit story that hits the mind directly.
is a ghostwriter, but Violet is more like a growing recorder, harvesting her emotions from people's different feelings.
Unexpectedly, but still a heart-warming and memorable ending, Yuzu's eyes are moistened again.
But this time it is much better than it was during the first review.
If the first chapter expresses the mother’s deep love for An, then this second chapter takes the novelist Oscar as the main character. From the identity of a father, through ghostwriting and writing novels, it expresses that the father is no longer there. The thoughts of a living daughter.
The style of writing is still as delicate as a drizzle, and the warm atmosphere is shaped so that the grapefruit can hardly find any faults.
For other works, as long as the manuscript is submitted, the editor will pick and choose, requesting various modifications and deletions.
Only here in "Violet Evergarden", the grapefruit is the most worry-free, and the manuscript submitted is not faulty, non-compliant, non-watery, non-white, and does not require any modification at all.
Now only need to show it to the editor-in-chief. After getting affirmation, you can go through the program and communicate with Mao Xuewang about illustration issues.
Send a copy of the manuscript to the editor-in-chief.
However, what Yuzi doesn't know is that the editor-in-chief is more attentive here than her, and took out the manuscript seriously, and gnawed word by word for more than two hours, in order to help the little vampire point out the shortcomings~www.NovelMTL.com ~ I'm afraid the quality of the work has deteriorated.
As the editor-in-chief of an independent group of Lightning Strike Library, he has of course read countless books, so he can easily point out problems and deficiencies to new writers.
Because in theory.
An editor reading a book is completely different from a reader reading a book.
How can I say this feeling?
If you are a person who has been an author, I am afraid you will understand this difference.
When an author or editor is reading a book, he will always unconsciously start analyzing, what kind of foreshadowing the work is, whether the writing is excellent, whether the plot arrangement is reasonable...
is similar to occupational disease.
This leads them to read books objectively without having a strong sense of substitution, not being deeply involved in the play, and picking out some flaws that even the author of the book can't even notice.
is replaced by those pure readers with a glance and ten lines, it is difficult to notice these.
The editor-in-chief is now in such a reading mode.
Then...
analyzed it carefully from head to toe.
His very shocking discovery.
This work actually made him unable to pick out any flaws!
……
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